Content: bullying

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I've wrestled with whether to write this memoir of my childhood for several years, but ultimately decided it would be worthwhile. I'm interested to know how this piece comes across to others.

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After reading again about the treatment of the jews in Kiev during the war, and about the massacre at Babi Yar, I wondered how it comes to pass that any particular group of society fancies itself above any other. It inspired me to write a modern story about something just as hard to understand. My story may prompt some to say, that's ridiculous, how could anyone pick on someone else because they have blue eyes but I would argue, is that really any more ridiculous than picking on a race because they are different only in some way that should be regarded as too minor to take issue with? I would love any feedback on how to bring this first draft up to scratch; how to make it more credible, more meaningful or poignant. Thanking anyone who takes the trouble in advance, cheers, Keen

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Lola doesn't fit in. She wishes herself invisible. INVISIBLE is soon to be published by Solstice Publishing. I've left the first three chapters to give you a taste :)

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