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 | Shadows of the night | Shadow | Novel | Horror | 2 | n/a | Feb 26, 2008 |
Summary: When everyone around her starts dying and a mysterious young detective working the case, Siera struggles to understand the unexplainable with her time quickly running out.....
I'd greatly appreciate any feedback people can give me, i've never written a novel before. I also tend to post the chapters before much editing, so I know they need to be (mainly because i'm crap at grammar and english rules, so i'm learning from your comments as i go!!). I'd really like any comments on the flow of the chapter, content, anything that stands out etc....All feedback is welcome!! Chapters: |
 | Describe this! | m_e_s | Short Story | Horror | 8 | 0.96 | Aug 11, 2007 |
Summary:Author Lady is back for another snarky review of the writing world. It has nothing to do with anyone on this site or any review given to me or anyone I know or have seen – well, okay, I was talking to Dewey about descriptions. He told me I need to work on mine – which is true – So I get to write another short story and I hope I get the descriptions right, hang the characters and the plot! I just want to work on my descriptions – or is word painting a better descriptive phrase? (WARNING – BLOOD AND GUTS – COULD BE A BIT DISTURBING) Chapters: |
 | Dark secret of the past | Shadow | Short Story | Memoir | 8 | 0.46 | Nov 9, 2006 |
Summary:A short peice from a part of my life that no-one knew about, and still don't. I was always the perfectly happy child and friend.
I am over it now and part of the reason i would like to become a psychologist. To be able to help people that are going through things that make them feel this way.
This is a rough peice i have barly edited. I don't really know why i'm posting it. The book im currently reading is about a severe case of this and i felt the need to write mine down.Chapters: |