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 | Fool's Paradise (2) | edwaed shafik | Novel | Thrillers | 5 | n/a | Apr 12, 2012 |
Summary:The chase and executing of Bin Laden.Chapters: |
| Ragged Edges Rewritten | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 11 | 0.31 | Mar 18, 2012 |
Summary:All feedback is welcome. Technical is desired as weak point.
This is a simple piece about 'feelings' I know! Overdone subject but alas.. they do follow us closely. This is a piece that took two minutes and to be honest have no idea where it came from. This is how I write. I cannot 'create' like so many of the talented writers on this site.
REVISITING THIS PIECE I SAW A LOT 'WRONG' WITH IT. Hopefully I have improved since first posting.. that is the feedback I would love to have. Improved? Not so self serving as not my intent. What I writer I feel is experienced by many.
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| MAGGIE'S POEM | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.58 | Jun 26, 2011 |
Summary:This is the third of five. The next more difficult as about a boy struggling with Aspergers. The other another boy who lives across the ocean.. I see him mostly in picture and in dreams.. he teases me in my thoughts though. Impish little man who speaks fluent French. He is also seven
This is about Maggie.. age four. She also struggles with a speech impediment. She can't say certain words and her best friend Gabby is always correcting her.. Maggie turns, hands on hips and says.. I have a'ho' in my mouth Gabby. I have a ho!" Her teeth don't meet so long speech therapy lies ahead.
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