Content: beach
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 | Who Cares About the Sea | yacolt | Poetry | Erotica | 3 | 0.22 | Nov 22, 2011 |
Summary:A pg version of this poem has been made into a video and is posted on Youtube at this link ---- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ceijq_z48Y4 -----
I had to water it down a bit for Youtube. So I renamed it By the Sea
It would be super cool if you took a look at the video and left a comment on Youtube.
Some people like the pg version better and some like this one - a comparison of the two would also be nice to know.
Thanks in advance if you do go to Youtube. I will do several reviews of your writing in return if you subscribe to her channel or comment on the poem on Youtube. It takes quite a bit of work to do a video poem, and it's my friend's channel, so it would be nice to know if our idea on video poems is an idea worth continuing!
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| Her eyes Your eyes | yacolt | Poetry | Erotica | 1 | 0.00 | Nov 22, 2011 |
Summary:I guess I'd like to know what do you think??! Too graphic??Chapters: |
| FAR FROM ALASKA | don michael | Short Story | Literary Fiction | 10 | 1.71 | Nov 20, 2011 |
Summary:A short story.Chapters: |
| Celestina: Chapter 7. Sarah and Garth move to Florida | francesca | Novel | Literary Fiction | 0 | n/a | Oct 16, 2011 |
Summary:This chapter flashes back to Sarah and Garth Grant as they move to Florida after a brutal assault in Chicago.
Garth grew up in Palm Beach and they hadn't considered returning there, but Garth's mother Helen urged them to consider it, and after some soul-searching, they did. With new jobs and a new house, it's the beginning of a new life, one which seems beautiful now but which will sour in coming years.Chapters: |
| A Layer of Darkness | R A Niles | Novel | Mystery and Crime | 1 | n/a | Oct 12, 2011 |
Summary:Mario Barbieri is sent to Alcatraz Prison for a grisly murder he did not commit.
Having escaped in the riot of 1946 he gets a second chance at life. But he must first find who the murderer was, but more importantly why as his conviction was clearly a set-up at a federal level.
Another fugitives from justice and SFPD detective Andrew Johnson help Mario uncover the web of the post world war II red scare and to the ultimate plot which reaches far beyond a simple homicide.Chapters: |
| Beach Bum | Sasaki | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 7 | 0.70 | Nov 9, 2010 |
Summary:Beach bum not a beach bum. I would like to know how to convert this from telling to showing. Any comments appreciated.Chapters: |
| A Dance with the Enemy | Buffalotales | Short Story | Historical Fiction | 2 | 0.00 | Sep 7, 2009 |
Summary:Does duty preclude a young girl coming of age? Where is the line drawn between common sense and public opinion?
Feedback welcomeChapters: |
| Footsteps in the Sand | linda lee | Short Story | Fantasy | 19 | 2.32 | Jul 23, 2009 |
Summary:Ally's biggest problem wasn't that she couldn't get to the altar for her wedding--It was working her way through the land of M before anyone notices she's gone.Chapters: |
| Moving Shadows | Kay Lovell | Novel | Historical Fiction | 7 | n/a | Feb 26, 2008 |
Summary:The story is based upon real facts but with the added writers license to indulge. Romance, and intrigue are part of the story. The development of the harbour in a remote Cornish village, the leading figure of this area was a Solicitor and a Banker, the Cornish family of long standing with connections to the throne. He has an affair with a male clerk, although married, not very satisfactory and his wife eventually meets an officer in the Royal Navy, whose frigate regularly berths at Georgetown, they immediately strike up a relationship.
Poverty in a Fishing Village, a hamlet of nine houses and the wonderful backdrop of the cornish scenery provides the setting for this gentle story.
Feedback: constructive critism please, any weaknesses please point out. development suggestions.
Thanks: I would like to thank those of you that have taken the trouble to give an opinion and it has been taken on board. The rest of the book is still under construction, and yes I do use too many words. But the editing is still underway. I have only just realised that I could alter the layout, still learning you see. Ooops!Chapters: |
