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 | HONESTY | PJ-MACK | Short Story | Memoir | 1 | 0.00 | Feb 6, 2013 |
Summary:True storyChapters: |
| Hungry The Soul | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.22 | Oct 3, 2012 |
Summary:Long long night... So may not be sharp or well formatted.
Dealing with a lot lately.. loss.. materiel, emotional and soon a loved one.
Some losses are those of choice. Some are not sad at all.. as lift burdens. Everyone most likely has a relative who as hard as you try, you simply cannot admire nor even like them due to their actions. Especially if he/she paint themselves as being Christian etc.. Their actions nothing that faintly resembles the title. Chapters: |
| Fool's Paradise (2) | edwaed shafik | Novel | Thrillers | 5 | n/a | Apr 12, 2012 |
Summary:The chase and executing of Bin Laden.Chapters: |
| MY DADDY | kyla | Short Story | Non-Fiction | 15 | 0.30 | Dec 19, 2011 |
Summary:This letter recently came into my possession. I hope you enjoy. Chapters: |
| The Wheelchair | pannastra | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 6 | 0.56 | May 25, 2010 |
Summary:I'd better explain a couple of things which may have you scratching your head.
Muti = Af for medicine, poison, etc etc.
Sun-downer = a drink (or 3) imbibed at about the time the sun’s going down, being 5:30 – 6:30 around these parts.
I look forward to comments.Chapters: |
| The news came suddenly | po | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 1.43 | Sep 17, 2009 |
Summary:my first cousin died recently of a drug overdose. This poem is how I dealt with the grief.
I am interested in how the style is perceived as this is a comfortable writing style for me.
This is the first time I have posted work on this forum and I am grateful for the reviews. I am grateful for the editing comments by kiwi & ulli as I have incorporated them into my piece. My first time listening to constructive editing advice. There maybe hope for me yet. To you other kind people, thanks for your comments. I will be sharing this poem at a family reunion today. Hopefully it will bring perspective & healing...
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| A Dance with the Enemy | Buffalotales | Short Story | Historical Fiction | 2 | 0.00 | Sep 7, 2009 |
Summary:Does duty preclude a young girl coming of age? Where is the line drawn between common sense and public opinion?
Feedback welcomeChapters: |
| Cool Breeze Blowing | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 35 | 1.76 | Mar 2, 2008 |
Summary:I changed the genre of this piece to poetry instead of a short story.. I thought too long for poetry but prosetry works and was also suggested by jb.. Plus I have learned, poetry can be long!
A true love story that we all would hope to experience. I knew both parties and dearly loved them both. They taught me what love should be and I have never experienced.
We lost John to ALS not so long ago. I wrote this as a tribute to this beautiful man. I tried to climb into his soul and tell him what he wanted to say to those he left behind. Especially his partner. I only pray I did him justice.
Since this loss.. the remaining partner met someone and knew love again. Also knew tragedy again as only a year or so into the relationship one died of cancer so Bill's journey to peace again lies ahead of him.
Of all my work this is the one piece I do want published so am hoping for any feedback that would guide me to this end.
While I may not believe in 'heaven?' I somehow do believe all who have left this physical world are but a 'breath away.' Why my love of chimes and my sharing them is a big deal for me.
When I am no longer in this 'physical world' many who have chimes from me will know, I am but a breath away also.
If you have already reviewed this and read it again.. post anything you think might be improved in a forum? No need to review again.. I am republishing for new members who haven't read it yet.Chapters: |
