Content: ambition
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 | Tick Tock (REPOST) | biljana | Poetry | Poetry | 4 | 0.40 | Dec 1, 2008 |
Summary:Considering submitting this for a contest. Pls let me know if it is strong enough:) Deals with ambitions and fear, and getting older. Pls let me know if the punctuation is okay and if the ending is complete! Thanks:) Chapters: |
 | Fire Starter | biljana | Poetry | Poetry | 3 | 0.30 | Oct 23, 2008 |
Summary:About the purpose of life and losing ambition and motivation. About finding a job where you can think for yourself and make a difference in your life or in the world.
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 | The Bitch Brigade of Bridgeton (title change) | jediprincess | Novel | Young Adult | 4 | n/a | Apr 28, 2007 |
Summary:When a shy, black, ballerina from a poor neighborhood is thrust into the affluent yet equally dangerous world of the prestigious Bridgeton academy, she is forced to overcome her insecurities in order to defeat the three most ruthless and vindictive girls in the school.
I have an agent for this book and I'm on my final edit before he submits it to a publisher. Any help is welcome. Even chapter jumpers are welcome if you comment on grammar, especially commas and verb tense, and whether the overall writing style hooks you. Also, if chapter jumpers could comment specifically on what I can do to make it more engaging, that would be greatly appreciated.
Please note: You never find out the main character's name. Not until book three anyway.Chapters: |