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 | Hidden Depths | QWLauren35 | Short Story | Commercial Fiction | 6 | 1.86 | Mar 7, 2011 |
Summary:My muse has been gone since last October. This is my attempt to win her back. I have NO IDEA where this story came from. It is not pretty. There are no heroes. It is extemporaneous, stream of consciousness. I have not tried to edit it in any way. I'm just putting it out there because I know that it should generate a response in those who read it, and I'm open to whatever gets said.Chapters: |
| Comic Relief (2nd try) | QWLauren35 | Short Story | Humor | 9 | 0.67 | Oct 20, 2010 |
Summary:This is my second attempt at this. IF YOU READ IT, PLEASE COMMENT!!! I've tried to add more visuals about the character, and adding his thoughts should make the piece funnier. I also changed the ending with a few quick words.
IS IT FUNNY????? That's the big question. If you read it at all, please let me know and fill in the rest of the review with x x x x x 'til you get to 50 words.Chapters: |
| Waking Dad | QWLauren35 | Short Story | Memoir | 11 | 1.07 | Sep 29, 2010 |
Summary:A woman I respect a lot said that I should write a story about my elders. So I have written this piece about my father, just to share. I have no idea if I'll clean it up and try to publish it or not.
While I'd love to hear how people react to it, you don't need to tear it up. Be gentle please.Chapters: |
| Comic Relief | QWLauren35 | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 6 | 0.60 | Aug 24, 2010 |
Summary:This is the monologue of a comedian who is doing his first performance on stage about meeting a girl on Match.com. I would like ideas on how to make it more humorous, and whether some of the "valley girl" language has to be removed to make it sound more like a male comedian. Also, let me know if it's R or PG.Chapters: |
