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 | Alice's Wunderland | 1_word_at_a_time | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.93 | Jan 7, 2012 |
Summary:Taking a break from Ruby Rose and feeling reflective, so thought I'd give poetry a crack. Not because I'm any good at it, but I wanted to play around with interpretations/double meanings.
I know as a poem this is really awkward - clumsy rhyming, lousy rhythm, annoying experimental pace ... so I'm looking more for suggestions on how to improve, rather than pointing out what I already know is crap.
I'm particularly looking for feedback on the content - I'm trying for the interpreting-alternative-meanings concept without being too obvious or too obscure ... walkin' the line, I guess.Chapters: |
| Clouds Edited/Republished | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 9 | 0.51 | Jan 24, 2010 |
Summary: Want to perfect a few pieces to send out! Please be tough as want what I submit to be the best I can make it.
way of escaping. child within creativity imagination
Is this better. Improvement in use of tenses punctuation etc
How does it make you feel? Does it stir the child within?
If you have already reviewed this... you can simply let me know in a forum if you feel I am making progress in my writing. Chapters: |
| FabLRiCs | Kay Lovell | Poetry | Other | 9 | 0.26 | Oct 24, 2009 |
Summary:Poem re science. Comments?Chapters: |
| Quite the Pickle | kat nove | Short Story | Humor | 11 | 0.31 | Oct 28, 2008 |
Summary:WARNING: This contains explicit obscene material - mainly because it's about politics. Prepare to be offended. Like all pols, I make no apologies.
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| COMPETITION PARAGRAPH | Cadfael | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 10 | 0.05 | Jul 31, 2008 |
Summary:An ABC Brisbane radio station - 612 4QR - is holding a competition, the prize being Books Alive! 50 Books You Can't Do Without! It's an Australian Government initiative to get people reading. The criteria was ONE paragraph, 100 word limit with the words - ALIVE - RADIO - BOOKS included in it. This is my entry! It's already gone so I'm putting it up here for a giggle. There's thousands of entries in and they've been reading some out every morning. Lots of them are very clever :) But I couldn't resist entering! The prize is the 50 books you can't do without LOLChapters: |
| THE WATER SHORTAGE | Cadfael | Short Story | Humor | 11 | 1.15 | May 23, 2008 |
Summary:Interested to know if this story is too old-fashioned in content and style. Chapters: |
| Time: a haiku | amarie | Poetry | Poetry | 4 | 0.06 | May 8, 2007 |
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