kiwi's Profile

Synopsis: Phoebe lives a privileged life in a...

Phoebe lives a privileged life in a repressed...

Love feedback. Sorry if it's blue (black?)

Final edition - I hope you like it - your...

Short and sour

Someone said if you get stuck with your novel,...

It needs work but I can't see it - your...

From the reviews and comments on my poems...

For my friends

I'd prefer a negative review than no review....

If you have criticisms/suggestions I'd love to...

Another go - I have taken on board all comments...

While checking my poetry for some pieces for...

If I wrote a summary it would be longer than...

Trying for Haiku - Ii this it?

Not sure what to ask for - say what you please.

I'm embarrassed - Sorry everyone - tried to...

The first stanza was on it's on to begin with....

Drabble Short Story in Poetry form

Just a little bit of fun - more a ditty than a...

Does it matter what I intend? Should it not be...

Republished - With respect to things we cling to

A moment of respect for Jeff Buckley

Say what you will: PS - I appreciate it all..

This results from my seeing a picture of the...

On creativity

I hesitated to submit this piece because I felt...

I started with "Calm" and re-wrote until I had...

In the evening calm I compose a piece. Say...

Odin Roark - my reply - from a stranger who...

Dedicated to my Dad and for all those who lose...

This may need a few more words.. what do you...

I never seem to be able to get the rhythm...

....with respect to Bob Dylan for a few of his...

Partners.... Republished for the contest

Political comment - feedback as you think best.

The Victorian Bushfires require a poem. I hope...

Never know what to say for his bit so help...

When rain falls upon a spiders web, the threads...

I think I know whats wrong with this but your...

After the Victorian bushfires we in Australia...

It's about privacy. All reviews welcome.

Please review freely... tell me if it's...

Another go for the Poet's Piano. Still wrong,...

This is about hope. I'm open to...

This is for a competition - due date this...

Is one's freedom anothers prison? Thoughts and...

New format for me. Not contrived - came at me...

Not a haiku.. I was thinking how when you guys...

The after effects of a night of poor decisions...

In the day's of drought.........

There is no sound in silence... Exploring...

Sometimes it's tough out there.....

An observation and a feeling on a lovely evening.

Now I know what a Chaiku is - this is my effort...

A friend died.

I appreciate any feedback

Wasted time

Others have done it brilliantly - written a...

Sitting on the ferry, watching the waves go...

Possibilites abound -

In the eye of the beholder... ...have to let...

What I see. Feed it back. I have thick...

From our perspective... down under

a moment that came to me, I thought I would...

I've tried hard. Could have submitted the long...

A call and refrain from the modern world. or...

I appreciate advice.

This aint quite right but I'm not sure what to...

Love! or is it just the sex thing. I posted...

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Poetry slam

You get the gist - nevertheless, I would like...

and so we age...

New style for me - I would appreciate feedback...

My second poem on the sea journey of boat...

A memory .. I do appreciate critical...

Is it too clever for words?

Too short? Updated since reviews. Sharpened -...

I'd like to give this to my family this...

Oh for gods sake, doesn't the poem say it....

Trying for a Tanka

Though I can't possibly imagine, I do.

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Your view is the only view that matters..

I began writing about the 500 word limit for...

I can't hope to match Georgia's midnight train...

The longest poem I've ever written! Could be a...

Flo, you asked for a poem and this one came...

sometimes I prefer a space to a comma. Take...

Tell me what you think. The tags are the...

Tears falling

This is a thought I wrote a while ago. I...

I hope you enjoy the poem. I don't mind at all...

This one is for you. And up to you.

I'll let this speak for itself.

It's pretty bad and I only submited it because...

I could write and rewrite for the rest of my...

I've tried to make this longer but I can't go...

Love and all that nonsense - used the S word....

I hope you find something in my poem to relate...

A contemplation.

Protection and inconsequence. Some things are...

a comment

My first poem of the new year. Any feedback...

What makes me consider a poem finished after...

Sorry about the line spacing. I can't seem to...

a little bit of summer love, I think. (from...

Sorta - You'll hate it. Well then you should....

I hope you enjoy this as is but i have...

Paris - what more need I say.

Life love and all that stuff- online...

A comment about the now.

Tragedy affects us all, some more than others....

Summary: Woman involved in car accident - any...

Selected excerpts from the electronic...

Sorry - no optimism here. TOUGH-drabble...

Any advice relished. Trying out for the Mezzo...

Here's my take. I hope it doesn't come across...

Story of family and loss and hope. All...

A thought on writing - just a thought..

Written when I joined the site, for the...