#1 08-12-2012 06:27:34
- cyeote
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Book one: The Rise of Bob McDoogal
Ever had a moment where you were at the start of something grand?
In my opinion Juan G, has a story that has great potential.
It s a quick read, and it may/may not have a long way to go.
But I am of the opinion the idea behind the story is well done.
The potential for this author is there, and I would like to ask the reviewers here to help him realize it.
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#2 08-13-2012 07:05:07
Re: Book one: The Rise of Bob McDoogal
http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/library … read/60424
Thanks man! I appreciate it!
A teacher puzzles the farce underneath an in dye.
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#3 10-02-2012 06:16:36
- flowing pencil
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Re: Book one: The Rise of Bob McDoogal
cyeote wrote:
Ever had a moment where you were at the start of something grand?
In my opinion Juan G, has a story that has great potential.
It s a quick read, and it may/may not have a long way to go.
But I am of the opinion the idea behind the story is well done.
The potential for this author is there, and I would like to ask the reviewers here to help him realize it.
Oh.. you bet! I love what I have read so far. The other marvelous quality about this author is not only willingness to
lake criticism in the way it was intended but embrace it! I think his comment to me was "You ripped a new asshole for my character!" I almost split a gut. this is a 'different' story. Main character is 'different' and style of the author is so quick witted. I can't wait to see the finished product,
flo
..."With the breakdown of the Medieval system, the gods of Chaos, Lunacy, and Bad Taste gained ascendancy" Ignatius Reilly..."Confederacy Of Dunces"
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#4 10-02-2012 06:47:30
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Re: Book one: The Rise of Bob McDoogal
cyeote wrote:
Ever had a moment where you were at the start of something grand?
In my opinion Juan G, has a story that has great potential.
It s a quick read, and it may/may not have a long way to go.
But I am of the opinion the idea behind the story is well done.
The potential for this author is there, and I would like to ask the reviewers here to help him realize it.
I know I felt that way when I first started Succubus Tear, C. Sorry not to have kept up with the re-writes, I've had a car buying adventure and you know how time consuming that is. I will return, I promise. Just ask Missy V. it took me almost a year to read her novel...
Anyway, I agree that Juan's got great potential but more than that a willingness to learn. Reading him is NOT a chore!
dags 
Stop whining about your life, and start thanking God for it.
You might think I'm crazy...that's all right with me...
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#5 10-02-2012 08:51:40
- Nathan B. Childs
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Re: Book one: The Rise of Bob McDoogal
If imagination had wings, Juan would be flying past Neptune by now. What disturbs me is his age.
I have . . . no, make that . . . I'm wearing underwear older than him. Keep writing, my youngest brother!!
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#7 10-02-2012 11:24:52
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Re: Book one: The Rise of Bob McDoogal
Juan G wrote:
Thanks to all! Waking up to such great words, its so amazing. I literally have tears in my eyes.
Wipe those tears little brother... you have another review to read! Took the old broad an hour so hop to it.
patti
..."With the breakdown of the Medieval system, the gods of Chaos, Lunacy, and Bad Taste gained ascendancy" Ignatius Reilly..."Confederacy Of Dunces"
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#8 10-02-2012 11:27:26
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Re: Book one: The Rise of Bob McDoogal
Nathan B. Childs wrote:
If imagination had wings, Juan would be flying past Neptune by now. What disturbs me is his age.
I have . . . no, make that . . . I'm wearing underwear older than him. Keep writing, my youngest brother!!
Natfoot!! You're alive!!!
Stop whining about your life, and start thanking God for it.
You might think I'm crazy...that's all right with me...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jfFunjzyIsE <<<<the theme song of my life>>>>
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#9 10-02-2012 12:42:46
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Re: Book one: The Rise of Bob McDoogal
dagnee wrote:
Nathan B. Childs wrote:
If imagination had wings, Juan would be flying past Neptune by now. What disturbs me is his age.
I have . . . no, make that . . . I'm wearing underwear older than him. Keep writing, my youngest brother!!Natfoot!! You're alive!!!
Alive is such a relative term, dagfoot, but I'm still kickin' down here.
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#10 10-02-2012 13:15:32
Re: Book one: The Rise of Bob McDoogal
Nathan B. Childs wrote:
dagnee wrote:
Nathan B. Childs wrote:
If imagination had wings, Juan would be flying past Neptune by now. What disturbs me is his age.
I have . . . no, make that . . . I'm wearing underwear older than him. Keep writing, my youngest brother!!Natfoot!! You're alive!!!
Alive is such a relative term, dagfoot, but I'm still kickin' down here.
hope your ok! glad to hear from ya!
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