#1 07-22-2012 17:21:33
- Crows Eye
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Odessa: Book One
Hi.
I'm a new writer to TNBW website and so far I'm very impressed with the supportive and knowledgeable community here...and of course, the writing!
I'm hoping to get a bit more feedback on my novel, Odessa. So far I've posted a prologue and the first two chapters and I hope to post a few more after some edits and doing more reviews and building up some more credits. I've rewritten and edited my story so many times that I just lose perspective and really need some fresh eyes, particularly writers with an eye for horror, but of course, I'd appreciate anyone willing to take a look.
I realize there is an ever-growing list of new and reposted writing, all needing reviews, so understand if I have to wait (anythings better than the four month queue at Critters).
Thanks to everyone here.
Crow (Mark)
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#2 07-22-2012 19:38:04
- madison
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Re: Odessa: Book One
Hey Crow,
The best way to get some reviews going is to leave some for your colleagues. This is, by and large, a reciprocal environment. Although not everyone you review will grace you in kind, that's generally how you get your ball rolling around here.
It takes a little time, but it's worth the effort.
Best of luck to you.
Madison
P.S. Love your user name.
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#3 07-23-2012 00:44:36
- Crows Eye
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Re: Odessa: Book One
Thanks for the tip Madison. I have, in fact, reviewed about a dozen stories so far and recieved 3 reviews back. Not looking to get something for nothing. Just thought this "Beta" thread was set up to find folks who might want to read and review new work.
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#4 07-23-2012 10:16:48
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Re: Odessa: Book One
Crows Eye wrote:
Just thought this "Beta" thread was set up to find folks who might want to read and review new work.
My understanding of a beta reader (and I could be wrong about this) is someone who reads a completed manuscript, after the author thinks it's finished, to give an astute reader's perspective before the author sends it off to an agent or editor.
I saw that you had posted a few chapters of your work. I'll try to take a look at your prologue soon. 
Last edited by tristania (07-23-2012 10:17:52)
The prison girls are not impressed
They’re the ones who have to clean this mess
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#5 07-23-2012 13:17:42
- Crows Eye
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Re: Odessa: Book One
Tristania,
ok. My bad. I'd seen 'Beta' used in writing circles, but was misinformed about what it actually meant. The chapters I posted have been through a few critiques outside of TNBW and I'm hoping my novel isn't too far off from being sent to a publisher, though a fresh set of eyes might think otherwise. Guess that is the kind of feedback I'm looking for. And yes, I would really appreciate you taking a look and giving me your feedback.
Thanks,
Mark
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