Thanks SquarePeg. I copied and pasted all the nits, and I'm now headed over to check out the review. Glad you're enjoying the read. That makes me smile. And I appreciate the heads up with Duolc's name. I just did a spell check on the MC names. LOL I didn't do the supporting characters, though. I'm on it.

I'll get on your next chapter tonight, girl.

Susan

Dang it, I republished chapters 1-2 and 3 and you should be able to review all three. I've had no problems with chapter 1 so far, buyt Seabrass couldn't get into chapter 2 so I republished it a second time. Do you want me to do that with 1? I don't mind. I have tons of points.

When you go to chapter 2, hit the review key before you start reading to see if it takes you to the review page. Then you can toggle back and read and review knowing you won't have a problem. I do that with all chapters that have been republished. Try doing that with 1 again as well, 'cause it may be a site glitch today.

If it's still a no go, I'm gonna email Sol to see if there have been glitches in this area lately.

I copied these edits, but think I have already corrected the question mark thing.  The Bacs comment is 'two' marks because of the dusting in the office in front of the secretary when she made a note on her pad, but maybe that needs to be more clear. I'm on it. Thanks so much, for the review. I feel really bad you didn't get points for reading and reviewing it

Try and post this again in chapter one. If it doesn't fly, I can republish that chapter for you if you are going to put this in there for those points. Just let me know.

Awe, thanks, girl, but still  -  hate you didn't get credit. Woohoo a sequel to Prophet!!!! You know i'm on that one!

Hi Susan, just dropped by to say I'm going to try to get back
to doing more on tNBW....Miss You
Lee

I miss you too, Lee! I can hardly wait to start reading more of your stuff 

SquarePeg wrote:

Hi Susan!
Tried to leave a comment on your site today, but it kept giving me an error.  Could have been user error - I'm not very techno-efficient.  Anyway - love the artwork! Are you the artist?

Thanks girl. Yep, I did the art work on all the book covers on FB and Pinterest. It's fun working the covers. (is that what you're talking about?) I have several up on the site. The Other F Word and Gator Baitin'.

I had problems getting on everything yesterday and threw up my hands, gave up, and worked on the Grateful Undead edits and formatting.

Just dropped in to let you know I revised Sentinel to give it more details. You
reviewed it once before and got the main thrust, but I think this version is
even darker. Would appreciate your take.
Lee

C Lee Brown wrote:

Just dropped in to let you know I revised Sentinel to give it more details. You
reviewed it once before and got the main thrust, but I think this version is
even darker. Would appreciate your take.
Lee

I'll check it out, Lee.

Susan-
When I said I didn't have a clue in my last review - I meant that in a "can't wait to see how this all plays out" kind of way!  I don't think the reader is supposed to have it all figured out at that point anyway! I really need to take more time typing my reviews!  Checking for more posts on F word right now!

Hey Susan what you up to, haven't heard or read a thing from you
in a while. You doing OK? Getting ready for hunting season up
there in Michigan?

I just bought a new Remington .270 with a Bushnell scope on it
off a guy for $300. Hard times sure make it easy to find great deals.
Back in the spring I bought  2 guns for about half what they sell for retail.

Let us hear from you.......
Your bud,
Lee

Susan and Lee, I would like to ask you if you would help me out with a short blurb I could use for my book.  I wanted to have a few editorial reviews to put in and current authors are good for that.  It doesn't have to be long.  Maybe a sentence or at most two.  You can post it in my topic if you are able.  Thanks in advance.

Hey Robert...I'll be glad to help out a fellow reviewer.
Look for something in your forum thread. Lee