#1 02-17-2012 11:40:01
- don michael
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Charlie's Clutter - short story by fwc672
Charlie’s Clutter,
is the only post on the site of fwc672 and was made on 23rd January 2012.
I think this is a superb short story, and would like to make a space here for others to tell of their reactions.
Thanks,
Don
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#2 02-17-2012 11:56:36
- JElizabeth
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Re: Charlie's Clutter - short story by fwc672
Agreed! John is a fantastic writer.
I don't know why you say goodbye I say hello
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#3 02-17-2012 12:57:48
- skeptikoi
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Re: Charlie's Clutter - short story by fwc672
Marvelous story. Highly skilled writing. Moving and perceptive.
Paul
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#4 02-17-2012 13:57:18
- deb
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Re: Charlie's Clutter - short story by fwc672
An in depth study of a tormented man. I really enjoyed it. John is a terrific writer.
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#5 02-17-2012 14:31:15
- Memphis Trace
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Re: Charlie's Clutter - short story by fwc672
Spectacular story, beautifully written.
Memphis Trace
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~ Writing fiction, just like poetry, is still an enchanting dance of words on paper. Make it a fun dance, one folks want to get jiggy with all night long, and they'll come back for more, every time. ~ Q.X.T. Rhazmeulen
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#6 02-17-2012 16:24:27
- flowing pencil
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Re: Charlie's Clutter - short story by fwc672
Oh.... I so agree with all of the above! Loved it!
Flo
..."With the breakdown of the Medieval system, the gods of Chaos, Lunacy, and Bad Taste gained ascendancy" Ignatius Reilly..."Confederacy Of Dunces"
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#7 02-17-2012 17:33:57
- dagnee
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Re: Charlie's Clutter - short story by fwc672
I agree with Flo about agreeing with the rest. I'm still thinkin' about it.
dags 
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#8 02-18-2012 02:43:08
- fwc672
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Re: Charlie's Clutter - short story by fwc672
Thanks, Don, and JLiz, Paul, Deb, Memphis, Flo and Dags for the kind remarks and instrumental input in helping to improve the story. John
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#10 03-02-2012 09:33:44
- pamlajj
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Re: Charlie's Clutter - short story by fwc672
I agree with everyone that this is a powerfu description of a descent into madness. C'mon, John, give us more!!
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