#51 05-19-2009 11:36:07
- Charity Malm
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Re: The review exchange
Hi Hanman,
I just wanted you to know that I have enjoyed our exchanges... We both write so diffrent that I have learned form you, for sure. I will add you into my rotaion this week---- look for my new review friend!
Charity ![]()
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#52 05-19-2009 12:14:01
- hanman
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Re: The review exchange
Charity Malm wrote:
Hi Hanman,
I just wanted you to know that I have enjoyed our exchanges... We both write so diffrent that I have learned form you, for sure. I will add you into my rotaion this week---- look for my new review friend!
Charity
Hey charity.
Yes we do write with very different styles. But that is why sites like this are so good. If nothing eles it shows how different styles can be enjoyed by all of us.
I'll be popping along to check out some more of your work later today.
Catch ya later.
Friends help you move. Real friends help you move bodies.
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#53 05-19-2009 22:47:11
- Charity Malm
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I just posted my review for ch 3... I wanted to add one thing I missed from my notes. I think that it is very hard to tell back stories, like your story about Jesus and John...
Many times that much of an info dump can be boring. However, I was totaly interrested... I think you told just the perfect amount and kept me in there for sure.
kuddos! ![]()
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#54 05-20-2009 21:33:22
- matt
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Re: The review exchange
hanman wrote:
matt wrote:
I'm dipping my toes into the water very cautiously here, but I've already made my point about how I originally viewed the star system (post #28) and how I'm more than willing to set my own opinions aside to be an active member of this group.
That being said, does anybody put any stock in the site's ranking system? To the best of my understanding, it uses the star system.Hey Matt. Look, as you can see, a few of us have been arguing about the star rating system, but i would urge you not to take the arguments from either side too seriousily. So we don't all see things the same way, so what. Sure wouldn't life be a terribly dull place if we did. Just jump in and enjoy yourself. We're here to write and have our woked looked at by our peers. The least important thing on this site is the star rating system. What you want are constuctive reviews that can help you create the story you want to tell.
The one good thing about the ranking system is that it helps people to push forward. To keep trying to climb the ranking ladder for a while at least. Then you sort of forget about it a bit. At the end of the day it's the story that matters, not where it's placed on the sites ranking system. If all that mattered was the rankings, we'd all be writing Lit Fiction, and Memoirs, because these tend to be the higest climbers. (Although not exclusivly, before soemone bites my head off)
Just jump in and enjoy yourself matt.
Got it, hanman!
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#55 05-20-2009 21:40:31
- mishmont
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matt wrote:
we'd all be writing Lit Fiction, and Memoirs, because these tend to be the highest climbers. (Although not exclusively, before some one bites my head off)
Aha, saved yourself at the last minute. I like that in a man. ![]()
Go, eat your bread in gladness, and drink your wine in joy; for your action was long ago approved by God.
--- Ecclesiastes 9.7
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#56 05-21-2009 21:03:58
- matt
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mishmont wrote:
matt wrote:
we'd all be writing Lit Fiction, and Memoirs, because these tend to be the highest climbers. (Although not exclusively, before some one bites my head off)
Aha, saved yourself at the last minute. I like that in a man.
Hey mishmont,
That quote was actually from hanman, but I'll gladly take the credit. Love your quote ffrom Ecclesiastes BTW. (Hope I spelled that right.)
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#57 05-21-2009 21:15:00
- mishmont
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matt wrote:
Hey mishmont,
That quote was actually from hanman, but I'll gladly take the credit.
Yeah, I seem to have trouble quoting quotes within quotes.
matt wrote:
Love your quote from Ecclesiastes BTW. (Hope I spelled that right.)
It is with me always. First saw it on a friend's kitchen wall and copied it---thirty years ago.
My daughter and son-in-law recited it at Dave's and my 25th anniversary vow renewals in 2001. He in Hebrew first, then she in the English translation.
Three months ago they repeated it at Dave's Memorial Service.
Go, eat your bread in gladness, and drink your wine in joy; for your action was long ago approved by God.
--- Ecclesiastes 9.7
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#58 05-22-2009 11:21:36
- W. Lois
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Hi everyone
I was so happy to discover this site a couple of weeks ago and have really enoyed reading and reviewing some really great work. I'm impressed because much of it is, I think, better than published novels that I have been reading. I will certainly look up the work of everyone who wants to be involved in the review exchange Hanman started. Please take a look at my "Hand of God". I can't wait to know "the truth" about what you all think and to improve on it based on your critiques.
Cheers for now!
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#59 05-22-2009 12:35:14
- hanman
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W. Lois wrote:
Hi everyone
I was so happy to discover this site a couple of weeks ago and have really enoyed reading and reviewing some really great work. I'm impressed because much of it is, I think, better than published novels that I have been reading. I will certainly look up the work of everyone who wants to be involved in the review exchange Hanman started. Please take a look at my "Hand of God". I can't wait to know "the truth" about what you all think and to improve on it based on your critiques.
Cheers for now!
I'd be gald to check that out for you.
Friends help you move. Real friends help you move bodies.
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#60 05-29-2009 01:01:25
- matt
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mishmont wrote:
matt wrote:
Hey mishmont,
That quote was actually from hanman, but I'll gladly take the credit.Yeah, I seem to have trouble quoting quotes within quotes.
matt wrote:
Love your quote from Ecclesiastes BTW. (Hope I spelled that right.)
It is with me always. First saw it on a friend's kitchen wall and copied it---thirty years ago.
My daughter and son-in-law recited it at Dave's and my 25th anniversary vow renewals in 2001. He in Hebrew first, then she in the English translation.
Three months ago they repeated it at Dave's Memorial Service.
I know you posted this a week ago, but I just saw it. So sorry for your loss.
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#61 05-29-2009 08:17:56
- mishmont
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Thank you.
Go, eat your bread in gladness, and drink your wine in joy; for your action was long ago approved by God.
--- Ecclesiastes 9.7
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#62 05-30-2009 13:08:44
- darla ferrara
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I would love to exchange reviews with anyone. My novel is titled Living with the Gray Tones and is a mystery. Please let me know. thanks
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#63 06-02-2009 15:48:33
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Re: The review exchange
hanman wrote:
Hi everyone.
As someone who is fairly new to the site i know how hard it can be to get the first few reviews going. So what i suggest is that we get some review exchanges going.
What i'm looking for is some people to exchange some reviews with me or with each other.
If your interested drop a reply here and we can take it from there.
I'm particularly looking for some of the newer writers to the site.
Cheers.
I've been away for about a month... but what a wonderful thing you got going here. Kudos!
Pssst... if and when I can, I'd love to review everyone's/anyone's poem. Just drop me a line. You don't even have to return the favour-- it's the genre I love most, the kind of writing I mostly do, and the work I really enjoy giving feedback to... plus I can knock out quite a few in a evening's sitting!
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Some books are to be tasted, others to be swallowed, and some few to be chewed and digested: that is, some books are to be read only in parts, others to be read, but not curiously, and some few to be read wholly, and with diligence and attention.
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English author, courtier, & philosopher (1561 - 1626)
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#64 06-11-2009 23:31:09
- Lost Soul
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Hi Hanman! Pleased to meet you. I try to review everyone who reviews me. I'm better at poetry, though. Try me, anyway.
Hello Angel,
I had no idea anyone here was in my neck of the woods. I live in El Cerrito.
Lost Soul
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#65 07-10-2009 18:37:11
- maryapryl
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Hi everyone,
I'm fairly new here myself. I'd be happy to exchange reviews with anyone who wants to. My novel is the Blood Inheritance. I'll start looking at everyone's as soon as I can. Be a little scarce tomorrow - been ignoring the boyfriend too long (or so he tells me in a whinny tone - LOL!) but will get to it as soon as I can.
Welcome to the site. - April
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#66 08-01-2009 08:37:28
- tlschneider
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Hello,
I am interested in doing a novel exchange if anyone is interested. My manuscript is a science fiction novel -A Slave to Freedom. I have 5 chapters posted thus far, with the remaining to follow. Let me know if you are interested.
-Terry
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#67 09-10-2009 18:10:37
- Patsy
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Anyone wants to do an exchange, feel free to contact me. New here just posted a chapter of a Fantasy novel called Knight of Sorrows.
Thanks,
Patsy
“The difference between perseverance and obstinacy is that one comes from a strong will; and the other from a strong won’t.? — Henry Ward Beecher
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#68 09-10-2009 18:23:19
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I'd be happy to exchange reviews with anyone. I don't have time right now patsy but I'm sure I could get to it tomorrow evening.
“Oh, aye, Sassenach. I am your master . . . and you're mine. Seems I canna possess your soul without losing my own.”
― Diana Gabaldon, Outlander
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#69 09-11-2009 22:17:54
- Patsy
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THANKS SWC, would love to.
“The difference between perseverance and obstinacy is that one comes from a strong will; and the other from a strong won’t.? — Henry Ward Beecher
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#70 10-05-2009 06:34:54
- krprice
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I've been on this site a few weeks and have had some feedback; all of it helpful.
My posted novel is an SF noir murder mystery called The Stiletto Murders. Any comments would be appreciated.
I try to review any one who crits me.
Thanks,
Karlene
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#71 10-28-2009 05:11:00
- Kay Lovell
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Re: The review exchange
Hello, I am not what you might call 'new'. As I first found this site last year. But for me it has been a traumatic twelve months. Really didn't do too much and certainly didn't visit here as often as I should have.
I am back with a new feeling about writing and mine in particular I love the idea of getting reviews, as one's work progresses. Sometimes, there are conflicting comments, what works for one does not necessarily work for everyone. So to get positive feedback is fantastic and it helps.
I agree with your suggestion, lets give it a whirl. I thank those that do give a review, and I always try to give them a reply. There are a lot who don't and then one doesn't know if what you suggest or not is welcome. If you know what I mean.
Thanks again everyone who takes the time to read my work.
Happy writing. Kay
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#72 11-03-2009 09:08:42
- theslyguy
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Hi everyone,
I like the idea of a review exchange so please contact me if interested. Just note that I don't normally romance or fantasy. Also, although I love poetry, I'm not the best reviewer of it as I don't write poetry myself.
Thanks!
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#73 11-17-2009 16:33:41
- Shadow
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Re: The review exchange
Hey guys
i'm technically not new as i was on here a few years ago but i am new to writing...i always review people who review me but would love to set up some review exchanges.
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#74 02-06-2010 06:13:51
- aldersmith
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I like your idea Hanman - I'd like to read similar stuff to what I write. Does anyone else write middle grade novels?
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The Full Effect @ http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/library … read/47232
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#75 02-25-2010 13:06:36
- Soledad
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I'm game. I've only been at this site for about a week, I think.
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