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#26 05-09-2009 19:11:50

Carolyn Kuczek
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Re: The review exchange

hanman wrote:

Okay Carolyn. I've added you to my reading list and will get thoes chapters reviewed on Sunday.

Catch you there.

Hanman,

Wanted you to know I got your reviews on my chapters.  Thanks.  I've been trying to rate them, but none of the links in my "Your Account" are functioning.  I e-mailed the site for help.

Thanks for your suggestions and tips on reviewing people's work.   Your comments were very helpful.  As soon as my rate icon is working, I'll send of a rate of your review.

Will be doing some rewrites on my chapters based on your suggestions on how I can improve them.

Carolyn Kuczek

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#27 05-10-2009 02:13:31

hanman
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No problem Carolyn. It can be a bit odd trying to get used to the site at first.


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#28 05-11-2009 23:08:17

matt
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Re: The review exchange

Hi hanman,

Thanks for helping me find this area. I was truly shocked by your interpretation of the star ratings. If this is the prevailing view, I understand why the Fantasy group insists on ratings of either 4 or 5.

I looked at the rating system as an indication of where a piece stood on its journey to publication and took the explanatory verbiage seriously (all except the needlessly laudatory "a worthy effort" for level 1 and "I'll remember this for a long time" for level 5). Frankly, I've tried to keep my particular tastes out of the reviewing process. If I thought a piece was ready for publication, I'd give it a 5 whether it was something I particularly enjoyed or not. If I thought a piece was only in the beginning stages and needed a lot of work, I'd give it a 1 regardless of how much I enjoyed the story or, at least, the story's concept.

I stand corrected. If most people are operating under your guidelines, then I am certainly willing to comply.

matt

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#29 05-11-2009 23:22:22

hanman
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Re: The review exchange

matt wrote:

Hi hanman,

Thanks for helping me find this area. I was truly shocked by your interpretation of the star ratings. If this is the prevailing view, I understand why the Fantasy group insists on ratings of either 4 or 5.

I looked at the rating system as an indication of where a piece stood on its journey to publication and took the explanatory verbiage seriously (all except the needlessly laudatory "a worthy effort" for level 1 and "I'll remember this for a long time" for level 5). Frankly, I've tried to keep my particular tastes out of the reviewing process. If I thought a piece was ready for publication, I'd give it a 5 whether it was something I particularly enjoyed or not. If I thought a piece was only in the beginning stages and needed a lot of work, I'd give it a 1 regardless of how much I enjoyed the story or, at least, the story's concept.

I stand corrected. If most people are operating under your guidelines, then I am certainly willing to comply.

matt

Yeah you gota watch that. There's a whole section in the forum where people get together and scream because of low scores. It's just a politeness. If people get 1 and 2's and sometimes 3's they feel they are being insulted and will, in most cases, not review the reviewers work. As we are all here to help one another the comments in the review should be able to convey what the reviewer feels the story needs. We don't need battles.


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#30 05-11-2009 23:24:43

matt
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Re: The review exchange

UNDERSTOOD.

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#31 05-12-2009 03:37:52

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Re: The review exchange

hanman wrote:

The un-written star ratings.

1. My god this is crap and should never see the light of day.
2. Not bad enough to delete but i hope i never have to read it again.
3. Bearable but not my thing.
4.  I enjoyed this but it needs some work.
5. Could be amazing with just a little work.

the admin should really change the stars to this. but then again it might be worse.



has anyone noticed that stars is misspelt?  it's starts.  lol

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#32 05-12-2009 11:05:15

Diomed Akren-duras
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Re: The review exchange

Hey Hanman,

I was curious how this would work. It looks like you've got a good thing going here, and now that i'm caught up on the fantasy forum i'd love to join this little niche. Any indocrination rituels i need to know about? haha smile.

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#33 05-12-2009 15:18:48

hanman
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Re: The review exchange

Diomed Akren-duras wrote:

Hey Hanman,

I was curious how this would work. It looks like you've got a good thing going here, and now that i'm caught up on the fantasy forum i'd love to join this little niche. Any indocrination rituels i need to know about? haha smile.

Nah no protocals. Just a spot for people to find others looking for reviews. I'm full at this stage. Between our circle and a few people i'v picked up here i bursting at the seams. Feel free to just leave a message if your looking for more reviewers and see what happens, that's all i did.


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#34 05-12-2009 15:22:35

Diomed Akren-duras
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Thanks hanman smile. i'll do that

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#35 05-14-2009 10:53:08

Rileigh
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Re: The review exchange

wow, had no idea about the star ratings.  I was going based what the site said as well.  I think the site is much better.  By using the definitions you've wrote Hanman it feels like the your limiting the rating system significantly.

It's WRITING people.  It always "needs" work.  Story's are constantly evolving creatures, sometimes freaks of nature that can mutate into something else entirely.  Nothing should ever really be "deleted" as the first star rating you've posted suggests.  Why would you hope you never had to read something again that could be completely different the second time through?  These are works in progress.  So since I vehemently disagree with what you've posted for 1 and 2 stars I guess by using your rating system I'm limited to three stars or higher?

I'll be using the sites recommendations that you very much.  Anyone who wants constructive truthful criticism, feel free to review my work and I'll get you back.  I'd appreciate that any reviewers that read my work use the sites definition and not a random set of definitions designed to artificially inflate the ratings.


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#36 05-14-2009 11:09:30

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Re: The review exchange

Rileigh wrote:

a random set of definitions designed to artificially inflate the ratings.

Not the reason at all, wouldn't work anyway if we all give fives.

There have been quite a few threads on this subject going back a couple of years.

There was enough disgruntlement with the star system that we were able to get sol to agree that they would not be posted publicly, only the author can see them.

I had reviewers who had MAJOR impact on my story.  With no exception they each rated all the chapters a 5 knowing full well I listen to their words not their score.


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#37 05-14-2009 16:50:05

hanman
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Re: The review exchange

Rileigh wrote:

wow, had no idea about the star ratings.  I was going based what the site said as well.  I think the site is much better.  By using the definitions you've wrote Hanman it feels like the your limiting the rating system significantly.

It's WRITING people.  It always "needs" work.  Story's are constantly evolving creatures, sometimes freaks of nature that can mutate into something else entirely.  Nothing should ever really be "deleted" as the first star rating you've posted suggests.  Why would you hope you never had to read something again that could be completely different the second time through?  These are works in progress.  So since I vehemently disagree with what you've posted for 1 and 2 stars I guess by using your rating system I'm limited to three stars or higher?

I'll be using the sites recommendations that you very much.  Anyone who wants constructive truthful criticism, feel free to review my work and I'll get you back.  I'd appreciate that any reviewers that read my work use the sites definition and not a random set of definitions designed to artificially inflate the ratings.

Hey Rileigh.
You seem to have misunderstood  me.
The rating system i gave above is not my own (as such) but rather a responce to how the people recieving certain star rating perceive them. I'm not saying it is either right or wrong, that is for you to decide. Go have a look in the Battererd Writers Syndrome forum on the site and you will quickly see just about every memeber here complain about ratings they have recieved at one time or another. And in my opinion they are justified to complain. Regardless of the site rules, ultimitly it is the users of the site that set the bounderies of those rules. And it is my experence that most of the users, by far, see the star rating closer to how i described it above then they do by the sites standard rules. I include myself in this. When i first joined i used the star system exactly as it was described but i very quickly learned that the people i was reviewing did not view the system the same way.  As a result of this i fell in line with my other writters and have had a much more pleasent experence since. And as for honesty? I have never given anyone i have ever read anything but an honest review and i don't believe i have ever recieved anything but an honest review either, wouldn't want to either. Writers will take a harder review more easily though and without taking offence, if that review is accompanied by, not to low a star rating. Why? Because we are all human and none of us want, or should be made, to feel that our work doesn't warrent praise on at least some level. Writing is by its nature subjective and the star system is objective, there for it is not an accurate way to get a point across and certainly not in a polite or friendly manner. In fact it does the exact opposite. It causes resentment and bitternes between people who came here looking for support and incouregment. I'm not saying that the start system should be removed or hidden, (in fact i wouldn't wish to see either) just used with due care and appriciation for our fellow writers.  And that view has become the cuture here and to go against it is to go against the culture and the people who have gathered and created it. In other words, our friends.

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#38 05-14-2009 16:55:13

mishmont
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Re: The review exchange

Well said Hanman.


Go, eat your bread in gladness, and drink your wine in joy; for your action was long ago approved by God.
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#39 05-14-2009 17:00:18

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Re: The review exchange

mishmont wrote:

I had reviewers who had MAJOR impact on my story.  With no exception they each rated all the chapters a 5 knowing full well I listen to their words not their score.

Amen.

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#40 05-14-2009 20:15:14

Rileigh
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Re: The review exchange

Writers will take a harder review more easily though and without taking offence, if that review is accompanied by, not to low a star rating.

So yes, you are artificially trying to increase the overall star ratings on the site.

Part of being a writer is being able to accept and deal with both positive and negative criticism.  Some of it will be unfair and ignorant, I feel like writers need to have a thick skin when it comes to this sort of thing.

I'm sorry for implying that you might lie in a review (or anyone for that matter).  I don't think that.  I just feel like no matter who the writer is (even a published writer) any first draft being read by others for the first time is not going to get more then 2 or 3 star (max!) rating.  I think that misleading someone just to save their feelings doesn't do anyone any good. EVERY piece of writing will go through many revisions before it's finished.  As it goes through the revisions it's then that's the star rating will go up.

A five point system is much more versatile the an artificial three point system period.

But there's really no need to argue about it this isn't really the venue.  You disagree, that's fine.  I'll continue to rate my way, you can continue to rate yours.


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#41 05-14-2009 22:13:38

mishmont
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Re: The review exchange

Rileigh wrote:

I'll continue to rate my way, you can continue to rate yours.

The bottom line is well conceived points for the author to consider.  That is what we care about.


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#42 05-14-2009 22:28:13

Diomed Akren-duras
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I think mishmont has hit the soul of this whole thing. I have no issue recieving 1s 2s or 3s in my work, so long as they are well founded. If i recieve a review with a 1 score, but the reviewer offers no solid advice, then its disheartening. If i recieve a review that's got a 1 and is brimming with advice, then that's helpful. I appreciate a honest opinion of my work, and i try to give mine to others. I've dished out 4 or 5s even to people who are not in the fantasy forum, and i've also given some 1s and 2s. But before i reach for 1 or 2, i make certain i have a very good reason, and that i outline that reason and give specific examples of how the author might fix it.

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#43 05-15-2009 06:06:51

C Lee Brown
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Re: The review exchange

Diomed Akren-duras wrote:

I think mishmont has hit the soul of this whole thing. I have no issue recieving 1s 2s or 3s in my work, so long as they are well founded. If i recieve a review with a 1 score, but the reviewer offers no solid advice, then its disheartening. If i recieve a review that's got a 1 and is brimming with advice, then that's helpful. I appreciate a honest opinion of my work, and i try to give mine to others. I've dished out 4 or 5s even to people who are not in the fantasy forum, and i've also given some 1s and 2s. But before i reach for 1 or 2, i make certain i have a very good reason, and that i outline that reason and give specific examples of how the author might fix it.

I agree wholeheartedly. I had one chapter that was previously reviewed to death and all the good suggestions, nitpics and such corrected. A person relatively new to the site reviewed it and gave a 3 but didn't really provide any significant feedback to justify that rating. I don't mind getting a star rating under 4 but I expect the write up to be fairly long and explain with examples of why they didn't find the material satisfactory.

My only concern would be if the star system somehow impacts contest entries. If it is taken into consideration say, for the strongest start three, then it needs to have better guidance to the newbies.

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#44 05-15-2009 07:15:12

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Re: The review exchange

Diomed Akren-duras wrote:

I think mishmont has hit the soul of this whole thing. I have no issue recieving 1s 2s or 3s in my work, so long as they are well founded. If i recieve a review with a 1 score, but the reviewer offers no solid advice, then its disheartening. If i recieve a review that's got a 1 and is brimming with advice, then that's helpful. I appreciate a honest opinion of my work, and i try to give mine to others. I've dished out 4 or 5s even to people who are not in the fantasy forum, and i've also given some 1s and 2s. But before i reach for 1 or 2, i make certain i have a very good reason, and that i outline that reason and give specific examples of how the author might fix it.

Mishmont always gets to the soul of things. (Yay, mish!) smile The justification for the score is the little blurb that accompanies it. No one owes anyone any advice or justification, all that's owed is 50 words--them's the rules. The scores should be abolished. They serve no purpose whatsoever other than to inflate or deflate egos. The ratings/rankings mean squat.

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#45 05-15-2009 09:28:26

Rileigh
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Re: The review exchange

s_thatcher wrote:

Mishmont always gets to the soul of things. (Yay, mish!) smile The justification for the score is the little blurb that accompanies it. No one owes anyone any advice or justification, all that's owed is 50 words--them's the rules. The scores should be abolished. They serve no purpose whatsoever other than to inflate or deflate egos. The ratings/rankings mean squat.

I agree, which is why I'm not a fan of this other rating system.  And I _always_ put everything I liked and disliked about what I've been reviewing.  In fact I think that last review I did for you s_thatcher was my shortest one yet.  And that's only because I loved the story so much and it seemed already very polished and refined.  There really wasn't much I could say except how much I liked it!


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#46 05-15-2009 09:34:51

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Re: The review exchange

Rileigh wrote:

s_thatcher wrote:

Mishmont always gets to the soul of things. (Yay, mish!) smile The justification for the score is the little blurb that accompanies it. No one owes anyone any advice or justification, all that's owed is 50 words--them's the rules. The scores should be abolished. They serve no purpose whatsoever other than to inflate or deflate egos. The ratings/rankings mean squat.

I agree, which is why I'm not a fan of this other rating system.  And I _always_ put everything I liked and disliked about what I've been reviewing.  In fact I think that last review I did for you s_thatcher was my shortest one yet.  And that's only because I loved the story so much and it seemed already very polished and refined.  There really wasn't much I could say except how much I liked it!

I love E.L. Doctorow. GREAT writer. He's a true 5. wink Welcome to the site, Rileigh. I hope you stick around.

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#47 05-15-2009 09:37:59

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Re: The review exchange

Rileigh wrote:

There really wasn't much I could say except how much I liked it!

...shit happens. smile

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#48 05-15-2009 15:53:18

hanman
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Re: The review exchange

Rileigh wrote:

s_thatcher wrote:

Mishmont always gets to the soul of things. (Yay, mish!) smile The justification for the score is the little blurb that accompanies it. No one owes anyone any advice or justification, all that's owed is 50 words--them's the rules. The scores should be abolished. They serve no purpose whatsoever other than to inflate or deflate egos. The ratings/rankings mean squat.

I agree, which is why I'm not a fan of this other rating system.  And I _always_ put everything I liked and disliked about what I've been reviewing.  In fact I think that last review I did for you s_thatcher was my shortest one yet.  And that's only because I loved the story so much and it seemed already very polished and refined.  There really wasn't much I could say except how much I liked it!

You still don't seem to be getting me. It's not a rating system. It's an observation as to how people seem to recieve the current rating system. I'm not claiming that the system i have shown earlier SHOULD be the way people shoud rate, simple a comment about how people percieve the rating they get.


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#49 05-17-2009 22:39:55

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Re: The review exchange

I'm dipping my toes into the water very cautiously here, but I've already made my point about how I originally viewed the star system (post #28) and how I'm more than willing to set my own opinions aside to be an active member of this group.

That being said, does anybody put any stock in the site's ranking system? To the best of my understanding, it uses the star system.

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#50 05-17-2009 23:27:35

hanman
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Re: The review exchange

matt wrote:

I'm dipping my toes into the water very cautiously here, but I've already made my point about how I originally viewed the star system (post #28) and how I'm more than willing to set my own opinions aside to be an active member of this group.

That being said, does anybody put any stock in the site's ranking system? To the best of my understanding, it uses the star system.

Hey Matt. Look, as you can see, a few of us have been arguing about the star rating system, but i would urge you not to take the arguments from either side too seriousily. So we don't all see things the same way, so what. Sure wouldn't life be a terribly dull place if we did. Just jump in and enjoy yourself. We're here to write and have our woked looked at by our peers. The least important thing on this site is the star rating system. What you want are constuctive reviews that can help you create the story you want to tell.
The one good thing about the ranking system is that it helps people to push forward. To keep trying to climb the ranking ladder for a while at least. Then you sort of forget about it a bit. At the end of the day it's the story that matters, not where it's placed on the sites ranking system. If all that mattered was the rankings, we'd all be writing Lit Fiction, and Memoirs,  because these tend to be the higest climbers. (Although not exclusivly, before soemone bites my head off)

Just jump in and enjoy yourself matt.


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