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#101 02-15-2009 22:36:08

amarie
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Re: Anya's Redemption

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Miss Riley doesn't have to attack Anya necessarily--it might be dull at this point, not sure with the two previous assaults--but the resolution to this conflict and some retribution should come through Anya instead of the police. And Miss Riley needs to be shown as unstable in the scene to make her extreme measures believable.

Last edited by amarie (02-15-2009 22:38:23)

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