This is classified as 'horror' but I found it so deep and moving.  It simply isn't a piece one can read and walk away from without some thought.  For me I have to revisit the piece a couple more times.  Being so wrapped up in the story it was difficult for me to even look for mistakes etc.

For a first draft? Which I think he mentioned but could be wrong.. this is a jewel. 

Personally touched by the characters and their dilemmas.  I have really been quite moved by the excellent writing I have been honored to read and review.  Really impressive.

Flo/Patti