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#1 04-23-2012 18:58:22

maryapryl
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MaryApryl's Review Thread

Current novel:  The Orphanage (needs a new title methinks)

Link:  http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/library … read/56764


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#2 04-23-2012 19:03:45

maryapryl
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Re: MaryApryl's Review Thread

I'm looking for anything you want to throw at me.  I'm awful finding my own grammer mistakes so that is always a plus, but I mostly need to make sure everything makes sense and that the pacing isn't off.


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